Saturday, December 7, 2013

Final Draft paper number three!


The moment you walk into any schooling system you can tell what its focuses are. Math, English, science, and the occasional history. It’s apparent that our school’s are lacking something vital and that is communication. School’s are so focused on cramming an extensive amount of information in kids’ minds to set them up to pass state issued tests and so on. What the school system needs is a communication class to teach the kids to be open and interactive. Everything in school is teaching pure information, what kids are lacking are communication skills that teach them how to talk to people and be confident in themselves.

What our children need is to have the chance to set themselves apart from others and give themselves the best chance of succeeding possible. The most qualified person in the world is not going to get a job if they can’t walk into an interview and represent themselves appropriately. There are very few jobs that are strictly independent, young adults need to learn how to communicate with others in order to be able to work in a group setting. Schools are focusing on meeting only academic standards and its crippling student’s ability to have an opportunity to express their thoughts and opinions. Worst of all, schools are teaching kids that this is something that does not need to be addressed. Allowing them to think that getting good grades will ensure success. In his book Pedagogy of the oppressed, Paolo Freire writes “education is suffering from narration sickness” (Chapter two), and that’s just it. With teacher’s bonuses depending on how their students pass a state issued test, of course classes are going to focus in from an academic standpoint. Not to mention all of the schools budget cuts students aren’t even being offered extra-curricular activities such as debate, drama, and other various sports. Schools need to recognize the value of making a class like this mandatory to ensure a well-rounded array of opportunities for their students.

                Unfortunately school systems are being set up to suggest to students that conformity is important, and are making sure they are dependent on their teachers to feed them knowledge to recite at a later date. In bell hook’s book Critical Thinking, she notes “those students who do not dread thinking often come to class assuming that thinking will not be necessary, that all they will need to do is consume information and regurgitate it at the appropriate moments” When really they should be benefiting from the opportunity of learning how to think critically on their own. In a real life setting there is no teacher directing you on how to complete the group task that may be at hand, you are left to figure these things out on your own. Young adults are not granted the free knowledge in a normal situation, they need to take the initiative to go and get it themselves. A communications class would begin to build and prepare them for the real world and build a sense of confidence student’s lack, allowing them to be successful in communicating.

                Schools aren’t giving students the opportunities to learn productive communication and express themselves in a positive way, and it’s crippling our young adults.  Behavioral problems would be sufficiently lessoned if students were given some way to channel their energy into acting positive. In the movie Chalk, directed by Mike Akel, the students had severe behavioral problems and don’t listen to their teacher, which causes the teacher to feel overpowered. This would help shape our young student’s into adults. In Chalk, when the history teacher lost “teacher of the year” he became very upset and flipped a desk in front of his students. If he had better communication skills he would have been able to express himself in a more appropriate manner. Also, after he had behaved so negatively in front of his students, he didn’t know how to apologize or explain himself to his students, which he would have known how if he had been taught how to handle such situations. If kids were taking a class to teach them how to communicate positively it would help with students talking skills, which becomes their behavior. Kids are being robbed of their chance to become outspoken independent people. It’s something that seems so easy to learn but unfortunately many people don’t, and schools need to address this. In her article, “Arizona Bans Mexican American Studies Program, Deb Aronson writes “young people being empowered is scary to many people, institutions, and establishments” and involving kids in the ability to communicate is empowering them. Schools should not fear or restrain young minds growing to express themselves in becoming young outspoken adults. It is important to equip students with what they need to succeed outside of school, and while math will always be helpful, knowing how to talk to people and convey yourself to others is something that will be necessary on a day to day basis.

            Initially people might think this class would be a waste of time and that it would be an easy A, but its teachings would be valuable. Many people think that children get enough social interaction at school with their fellow classmates and should be learning how to communicate on their own by trial and error. Unfortunately what people fail to see is that the ability to have friends and be social with someone you are close to is not what people are lacking, they are lacking the ability to be confident in their speech and walk into any situation prepared. Common people might assume that the teachings in this class would be social, meaning, talking and gossiping with fellow classmates which is not true. It would be designed to create situations for students and see how they would react, and then showing and teaching them the right way to act. This class in no way would be made to teach kids how to have friends, but how to handle situations presented in life.  

The movie Dead Poets Society, directed by Peter Weir, is a perfect example of how schools drive to be purely academic and don’t feel it necessary to hold on to classes such as drama. The school teaches students that if they want to be an accountant, to take accounting classes. Of course you are going to need accounting classes, but how will you gain clients if you have no people skills. No one will want to do business with you. In the movie a student’s parents wouldn’t allow him to take drama because he was on a purely academic track. He didn’t know how to take control of his life and convey to his parents and teachers what he wanted. This resulted in him ultimately committing suicide. If he had learned how to deal with these situations he would have been more prepared to handle them, and perhaps his situation would not have become so dire. Being able to talk to people and being comfortable in social situations is a requirement in life. This is what our schools need, and that is what they are lacking.  

Without the addition of a communication class, school would ultimately be the same. Class would be academic and students would become experts in reciting, but they will continue to have a harsh realization that they are not yet equipped to handle real world situations when they begin to encounter them immediately after graduating high school. When they move into their dorms at college, when they go to their first job interview, and when they encounter a difficult situation with someone they just met. They will be forced to try and adapt like they always have been, when schools could be preparing them with knowledge that is immediately applicable to the real world.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Sited sources

 

hooks, bell. Critical Thinking: Practical Wisdom. New York: Routledge, 2010. Print.

 

Freire, Paulo. Pedagogy of the Oppressed. New York: Herder and Herder, 1970. Print.

 

Debaronson.com. Arizona band Mexican American studies program, 2012. Web. September 2012.

 

Chalk. Dir. Mike Akel. Perf. Jeff Guerrero, Chris Mass. Virgil Films, 2007. DVD.

 

Dead poets Society. Dir. Peter Weir. Perf. Robin Williams, Robert Leonard. Buena Vista Pictures, 1989. DVD.

 

 

sited sources

Sited sources

 

hooks, bell. Critical Thinking: Practical Wisdom. New York: Routledge, 2010. Print.

 

Freire, Paulo. Pedagogy of the Oppressed. New York: Herder and Herder, 1970. Print.

 

Debaronson.com. Arizona band Mexican American studies program, 2012. Web. September 2012.

 

Chalk. Dir. Mike Akel. Perf. Jeff Guerrero, Chris Mass. Virgil Films, 2007. DVD.

 

Dead poets Society. Dir. Peter Weir. Perf. Robin Williams, Robert Leonard. Buena Vista Pictures, 1989. DVD.

Thursday, December 5, 2013

Rough draft

The moment you walk into any schooling system you can tell what its focuses are. Math, English, science, and the occasional history. It’s apparent that our schools are lacking something vital and that is communication. Schools are so focused on cramming an extensive amount of information in kids’ minds to set them up to pass state issued tests and so on. What the school system needs is a communication class to teach the kids to be open and interactive. Everything in school is teaching pure information, what kids are lacking are communication skills that teach them how to talk to people and be confident in themselves.
                What our children need is to have the chance to set themselves apart from others and give themselves the best chance of succeeding possible. The most qualified person in the world is not going to get a job if they can’t walk into an interview and represent themselves appropriately. There are very few jobs that are strictly independent, young adults need to learn how to communicate with others in order to be able to work in a group setting. Schools are focusing on meeting only academic standards and its crippling student’s ability to have an opportunity to express their thoughts and opinions. Worst of all, schools are teaching kids that this is something that does not need to be addressed. Allowing them to think that getting good grades will ensure success. In his book Pedagogy of the oppressed, Paolo Freire writes “education is suffering from narration sickness” (Chapter two), and that’s just it. With all of the schools budget cuts students aren’t even being offered extra-curricular activities such as debate, drama, and other various sports. Schools need to recognize the value of making a class like this mandatory to ensure a well-rounded array of opportunities for their students.
                Unfortunately school systems are being set up to suggest to students that conformity is important, and are making sure they are dependent on their teachers to feed them knowledge to recite at a later date. In bell hooks book Critical Thinking, she notes “those students who do not dread thinking often come to class assuming that thinking will not be necessary, that all they will need to do is consume information and regurgitate it at the appropriate moments” When really they should be benefiting from the opportunity of learning how to think critically on their own. Which would require them to form their own thoughts and opinions. Opinions meant to be expressed and build a sense of confidence student’s lack, allowing them to be successful in communicating.
                Schools aren’t giving students the opportunities to learn productive communication and express themselves in a positive way, and it’s crippling our young adults.  Behavioral problems would be sufficiently lessoned if students were given some way to channel their energy into acting positive. In the movie Chalk, directed by Mike Akel, the students had severe behavioral problems and don’t listen to their teacher, which causes the teacher to feel overpowered. If kids were taking a class to teach them how to communicate positively it would help with students talking skills, which becomes their behavior. Kids are being robbed of their chance to become outspoken independent people. It’s something that seems so easy to learn but unfortunately many people don’t, and schools need to address this. In her article, Arizona Bans Mexican American Studies Program, Deb Aronson writes “young people being empowered is scary to many people, institutions, and establishments” and involving kids in the ability to communicate is empowering them. Schools should not fear or restrain young minds growing to express themselves in becoming young outspoken adults. It is important to equip students with what they need to succeed outside of school, and while math will always be helpful, knowing how to talk to people and convey yourself to others is something that will be necessary on a day to day basis.
The movie Dead Poets Society, directed by Peter Weir, is a perfect example of how schools drive to be purely academic and don’t feel it necessary to hold on to classes such as drama. The school teaches students that if they want to be an accountant, to take accounting classes. Of course you are going to need accounting classes, but how will you gain clients if you have no people skills. No one will want to do business with you. Being able to talk to people and being comfortable in social situations is a requirement in life. This is what our schools need, and that is what they are lacking.  

Not to put the schooling system completely to shame, it has somewhat been attempted to be added as optional curriculum in classes such as public speech. Although this deals with speaking skills it narrows its teaching on, again, memorizing and reciting speeches. A communication class needs to be focused on getting a student’s attention and allowing them to form opinions and be able to find ways to word them, to allow them the opportunity to work collaboratively. 

super duper rough draft/brainstorm ideas

     “education is suffering from narration sickness”

In his book Pedagogy of the oppressed, Paolo Freire writes “education is suffering from narration sickness” (Chapter two)


“those students who do not dread thinking often come to classes assuming that thinking will not be necessary, that all they will need to do is consume information and regurgitate is at the appropriate moments.”






The moment you walk into any schooling system you can tell what its focuses are. Math, English, science, and the occasional history. It’s apparent that our schools are lacking something vital and that is communication. Schools are so focused on cramming an extensive amount of information in kids’ minds to set them up to pass state issued tests and so on. What the school system needs is a communication class to teach the kids to be open and interactive. Everything in school is teaching pure information, what kids are lacking are communication skills that teach them how to talk to people and be confident in themselves.

                What our children need is to have the chance to set themselves apart from others and give themselves the best chance of succeeding possible. The most qualified person in the world is not going to get a job if they can’t walk into an interview and represent themselves appropriately. There are very few jobs that are strictly independent, kids need to learn how to communicate with others in order to be able to work in a group setting. Schools are focusing on meeting only academic standards and its crippling student’s ability to have an opportunity to express their thoughts and opinions. Worst of all, schools are teaching kids that this is something that does not need to be addressed. Allowing them to think that getting good grades will ensure success. In his book Pedagogy of the oppressed, Paolo Freire writes “education is suffering from narration sickness” (Chapter two), and that’s just it. With all of the schools budget cuts students aren’t even being offered extra-curricular activities such as debate, drama, and other various sports. Schools need to recognize the value of making a class like this mandatory to ensure a well-rounded array of opportunities for their students.

                Unfortunately school systems are being set up to suggest to students that conformity is important, and are making sure they are dependent on their teachers to feed them knowledge to recite at a later date. In bell hooks book Critical Thinking, she notes “those students who do not dread thinking often come to class assuming that thinking will not be necessary, that all they will need to do is consume information and regurgitate it at the appropriate moments” When really they should be benefiting from the opportunity of learning how to think critically on their own. Which would require them to form their own thoughts and opinions. Opinions meant to be expressed and build a sense of confidence students lack, allowing them to be successful in communicating.

                Schools are getting so bad that students have behavioral issues due to the fact that they are forced to conform to what is being taught with no freedom to



 Kids are being robbed of their chance to become outspoken independent people.
 

Wednesday, November 27, 2013

Group ratings & disagreements

Jerry Large- Good idea but hard to change. School does not have control over home life. Good assist but not a solid plan.

Deb Aronson- Important, if we start at the head of the education it can go down.

Keith Gilyard- What is more important, math or creativity?

Bell hooks- Good idea but an opinion

Boyce- If you do not get social skills you will not succeed  



Disagreements- Large- Good idea some said and is very important. But argues that it is to big of an idea and some parents wont be able to make the change. 
-Boyce- Social skills are important in life, but argues that you need an education more then how to present yourself.
-Hooks- Great idea, but argues that it is just an idea and not a plan to workout. To broad
Top choice- Keith Gilyard, start investing the money into classes that students want and they will learn to think critically.
2nd Choice- Deb Aronson- Very good idea that people who make the education should be ones that teach it. You would not have the head of a police department be someone who has never been a police

rank 1-5 (mine)

Bell hooks- 1

Keith Gilyard- 2

Deb Aronson- 3

Jerry Large- 4

Barry Boyce- 5

ideas for change

A Real Education by Barry Boyce
He discusses what children should be taught as far as citizenship, friendships, and empathy. leading them to learn basic life skills.

Gift of Grit, Curiosity Help Kids Succeed by Jerry Large
discusses how environments effect children and their learning. his plan of action is to start improving the environment at home and setting it for success, because teaching starts there.

Arizona Bans Mexican American Studies Program by Deb Aronson
She explains how teachers should be the ones who make political choices about their students because politicians know nothing about education and cannot decide what classes are okay to cut.

Children, Arts, and Du Bois  by Keith Gilyard:
He discusses how giving back the humanities will help the economy and other aspects of student learning. it is important to have these creative classes and they should not be cut back to where there is purely core classes available.

Teaching- Critical Thinking by Bell hooks
critical thinking is essential to the well being of a classroom. teachers and students both complain of boredom in the classroom. if critical thinking is going on students will be more interested therefore no one will be bored.